Please critique my intro part and the research part for the SOP
Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2018 2:25 pm
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1. Grammatical mistake. "Astronomy, astrophysics, and cosmology". (remove 1 "and")Atulit1992 wrote:
Astronomy and Astrophysics, and cosmology are the most ingenious sub-fields of the physics.
Grammatical inconsistency again. "The subject uses" is singular, but you named three subjects in the previous sentence.I admire how the subject uses elegant mathematics and observational data to study the astrophysical phenomenon.
The strong collaborative nature of Astronomy and Astrophysics department of the University of XXX motivates to develop new ideas and work on existing knowledge to understand the solar system and galactic phenomenon in the large-scale universe.